AHHH Confusion!?

Im still very mixed up with plot ideas, and still brainstorming new storylines as we speak.
My lasted idea is to change the story line to replace the initial idea of a chase to simple a follow of a single character.

Descriptions: Gang - 4/5 - Preferably one on a bike. 1 Smoking. Dressed in hoodies and trackies/jeans, Typical british 'chav' style look


1) Firstly, it opens with some panoramic shots of an open field. It then focus's of a humble dog walker, walking through the field.
2) It then completely switches to opening shots of a rough looking area. It then focus's of some hooded guys talking amongst themselves. One of them suggests a possible plot. (* To get the message across to the audience that the hooded people are up to no good, i could open with a shot of them running, and an angry voice heard in the distance*)
3) It then cuts to back to the dog walker, slowly coming up to an area of woodland. The dog runs off ahead. TITLES START HERE.
4) It cuts back to the gang. straight into close up shots of faces. Talk is brought up of a fight/knife crime that one of the members was in. All others were witness's.
5) Cuts of a close up of the dog going into the trees, starting to sniff and crawl through leaves. Blood is dripped across.
The voices of the gang are played over the top of this shot for a short delay.
6) It then goes back to the gang
"Do you think anyone will find out about it"
No. I hid it pretty well.
Cuts back to the dog. More and more blood is present as the dog ventures deeper into the foliage.
7) Are you sure?
Yes. Just don't worry about it. No one will ever no
8) Shots of the dogwalker following the dog, noticing the trail of blood. He keeps going deeper and deeper into the forested area. he stops in an open area and looks at a tree in which blood is draped down it. He looks up and finds a body (which we don't see, just his facial expressions. Music gets very intense.
End.